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TheInfamousJoeLinder Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Hey there Thing,

I have a webcomic I'm trying to promote,
would you be interested in checking it out?

Thank you for your time :)
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LittleTallThing Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
Hey! Just had a quick look at it, thanks for letting me know.

Here's some feedback/advice if you want it (you don't have to read it if you don't want it):

Really interesting drawings, really unique style! :) (quite trippy, not gonna lie). So far so good in terms of plot line too.  

At some points it gets a little bit confusing, the first chapter explains the back story quite clearly, second chapter not so much. Different bits don't seem to link together as well.  
Do you do rough storyboarding? I know that the best comics are ones where each 'panel' describes the situation well enough so that if the text was taken away it would make sense? Difficult to do but still achievable. The webcomic Ava's demon is really good at this, most 'panels' you can understand without the text. Also if you give yourself a limit to the number of panels/pages in each chapter you will learn how to explain the story with as few pages as possible. Which is great to get the reader's attention in a snappy way.
 
Good luck! 
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TheInfamousJoeLinder Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for such a response xD

and I'm really glad to hear the first chapter was explained clearly :)
Luckily (or unfortunately) chapter 2 is supposed to be confusing up to the title.
Due to these being glimpses of scenes that will be fully explained later~ 

Speaking of stories, Ava's demon is awesome xD 
My wife and I really enjoy reading it >w<

most of everything else I read is stuff I try to use currently :)
and thank you for writing it ^u^

I'll try my best to constantly improve~
thank you for your time :)
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yuralock Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Hi! Thank you very much for watching me! :hug: 
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LittleTallThing Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
My pleasure, You've got nice stuff! Thanks for the llama ;P :highfive:
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ThroughSpaceAndTime Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*waves* Hi! Happy birthday :)
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LittleTallThing Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thank you very much!! That's very sweet :)
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ThroughSpaceAndTime Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! And happy New Year :)
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LittleTallThing Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Happy new year to you too! :D 
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Paul-Shanghai Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just wanted to say thanks for adding me to the list of people you watch on DA, and if you havent already joined? I would like to invite you to the 'Watchers Group' an exclusive group set-up just for those who watch me to show my thanks to you for watching - you can join by following the link watchers-feature.deviantart.co… :D

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